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Mindfulness Escapes You by ~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand:



I could not stop
Tasting her in your kiss...
How could I ever trust,
What you never let her miss?

And you got mad at
                    -- Me...?
When you came here
To break my heart.

How dare you start
The conversation with
A questioning of my
                 Intentions.

Throw my nature in my face
              And then throw me away.

Although:
I should have questioned them
Myself. First,
             Second,
third chances always fail.

I’m sorry I tasted her
                    In your mouth.

One with every word
               You spoke
And in your eyes.

Another in your kiss
Whom you --
                Despise?

I never tasted myself
                          In you.
©2008-2009 ~MissUnderstand
:iconmissunderstand:

Author's Comments

And you get mad
when I do everything
you threw us away to do.

I find it amusing how you
read
and block
but talk
is impossible.

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Inspiration: [link]

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:iconsaturnineguise:
wow, thank you.

i love this, and i feel this, and i think i am this sometimes.


:heart:
:iconmissunderstand:
No, thank you.
:)

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconeaglealex:
im glad i read this its tough but real and i am inspired by you

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Half the populace see only the foolish hopes of the passionate, while we see only the denied aspirations of the willing...
:iconmissunderstand:
Oh... Thank you!

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:icontrump-ice:
Hey. I like your work too. Keep it going!
:iconmissunderstand:
Thanks a bunch.
I stopped writing for a few years,
so I was unsure how people would respond.
And thanks for the fav :)

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconhaylale:
:O

Words cannot express
this feeling
I must confess
when I read this
all that you profess :wow:

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I'm a poet and dint know it!
:iconjux2fux:
i'm a in awe right now i dont know really how you put these words together but it hit me hard like shocking almost how i feel what your saying i love it!
:iconmissunderstand:
I glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the favourite.
And the dev watch.
:)

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.

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