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I prefer stars
to diamonds
any day.

Luckily tears don’t
turn to pearls.
Cause I’d be rich,
and you’d be
Jealous.

Jealous that you’re
Nothing, no-one
No-where, now
Now that I am
Moving on, and
making out

What I want.

And holding hands
means more than
locking lips and
leaving love
behind.

Means love;
love and affection,
not rejection.

That was cold.

You made a
promise...
to a pessimist,

That’s dangerous.
©2008-2009 ~MissUnderstand
:iconmissunderstand:

Author's Comments

Hmm?

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:iconozujak:
iLike. <3

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:iconmissunderstand:
Thank you, I'm glad.
And for the favourite.
Much appreciated!

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconcappyandpashy4ever:
You made a
promise...
to a pessimist,

That’s dangerous.

Oh, don't I know it...

Your poems are absolute love.

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Wow, you got a pick-axe? I wish I had a pick-axe!
:iconmissunderstand:
Oh I don't know...
I think they're anything BUT love.

But I am glad you enjoy them.

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconyouinventedme:
the fourth stanza is my favorite in every way.


xo!
:iconmissunderstand:
Thank you, I'm not suprised ;)
I think it's my favourite.
The poem was initially just the first stanza and the fourth.
Thank you for actually leaving a comment.

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconmasa-chan:
Because stars are stained-glass windows
That encrust your sight with immaterial truth that somehow
Just somehow
Leave the bad past before the last.

Random comment from a random deviant. Sorry. I just had to say it.

Luckily tears don’t
turn to pearls.
'Cause I’d be rich


This was amazing to read. You made my eyes burn. =/
Gosh, I can't wait to read your other work.
I think I feel a watch coming on...

^^

+fav :rose:

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Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him.
Wepeghim 'o 'abai him.
:iconmissunderstand:
Aha, thank you.
I like your interpretation, I was kind of going for something vague, so I'm glad you found meaning in it.
The first stanza was originally a comment for a poem by :icontec-thepenofmerlin: In his he would go for diamonds over stars.
I'll give you my interpretation of my words if you'd like, or we can leave it as the poem the way you've read it.
Consider the lines about how much I enjoy holding hands when thinking about the first stanza.

Thanks again :D

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconmasa-chan:
Oh, yes, please! Give me your interpretation.

I'd love to hear it!

And you're so welcome. :heart:

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Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him.
Wepeghim 'o 'abai him.

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