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A Notion Procured by ~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand:

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You say it, said it
And I hear, or heard
             -- Every word,
     (Recurred).

But words are merely
               a series of slurs,
A notion that blurs
Not really that which
                -- Occurs.

Your mouth spills over
               and bubbles, with
Guinness flavoured
Utterances of notions
That should be savoured
              -- Not slave(R)ed

Slave(R)ed –
   -- A word.
-- A notion procured
Meaning slave to
        -- the word
And the act referred.

I like-love-hate-want-need-seek-feel-despise-remember-desire-retire you
©2008 ~MissUnderstand
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It's 2am
and I think of
where I am
who I am
and whre you are
and who your with
and who he's with
what you've done
and what you did
what you said
and why it was said
it was dead
with emotion
and alive with
liquid motivation.
(not to mention
physical temptation)

[make words up when you cant rhyme what you want]
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~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand: Apr 30, 2008, 1:39:38 AM
p.s
the (R) was intentional.

--
----
I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
~blue-strawberry:iconblue-strawberry: May 1, 2008, 3:30:08 PM
you can do something I never can - you can rhyme easily. I enjoyed reading this:)

--
"do the day and let the day do you"
~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand: May 1, 2008, 6:29:17 PM
Thanks.

I actually write it out without rhymes first
so that I know what I want to say
and then work with it to get the rhymes where I want,
if I want.

--
----
I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
~blue-strawberry:iconblue-strawberry: May 3, 2008, 10:06:40 AM
ahh, maybe I should try that sometime.

--
"do the day and let the day do you"
~Haylale:iconHaylale: May 4, 2008, 1:34:08 PM
Make up a word? Slavered is a word silly :D
Maybe i miss something?

Interesting flow to your poem. As far as words go for rhyming i know what you mean by having a series of syllables be exactly what you want and it isn't even a word lol...or...:O

:glomp:

--
I'm a poet and dint know it!
~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand: May 4, 2008, 10:29:56 PM
You know what, you're right.
It is a word.. and it works in the contest I used it too...
Meaning to drool and act innappropriatly or something?
Wow, I wasn't even thinking of it that way.
I meant that the word should not make one feel like a slave, and should not be forced, but slaved didn't rhyme.
I added the (R) to make it rhyme, and to refer to the "Restricted" rating on movies....
Look at me, making a double play on the word without even knowing i did it.
Thanks for pointing that out!

--
----
I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
~Haylale:iconHaylale: May 4, 2008, 10:56:14 PM
:)

It's connotation is usually drooling like a school boy at a prom queen. Also like someone being crushed on someone...:O

--
I'm a poet and dint know it!
~MissUnderstand:iconMissUnderstand: May 4, 2008, 11:04:26 PM
It works.
The prom queen is a fake.
Go for the poet in the corner.

--
----
I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
~Haylale:iconHaylale: May 5, 2008, 6:52:40 PM
o.O

are you the poet in the corner?

--
I'm a poet and dint know it!
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